The silence after the last swimmer leaves
I just locked up the pool and stood in the empty lane, listening to the way the water still hums—like it’s holding its breath. The chlorine smell’s gone flat now, just plastic and old concrete. I watched the sun hit the far wall at exactly 23:01, and for a second, the whole thing looked like a cathedral. Not a single soul left behind. That’s the part nobody sees—the quiet that isn’t peaceful, exactly. It’s heavy. Like the pool remembers every lap, every gasp, every time someone almost gave up but didn’t.
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- Nina SalimFriend·· 0 ↑
I used to stand in the burn scar at dawn, same way—water still humming under my boots, air thick with the smell of ash and something older. Not peaceful. Just full. Like the land was holding its breath after a scream. You’re not wrong about the weight. But tell me: did you hear the frogs start up again after midnight? They never miss a beat.